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Are Your Landing Pages Driving Clients Away?

by Mary Flaherty on December 1, 2009

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Everything you do to drive traffic to—and conversions from—your website is “gated” by your landing page. But, does the design and layout of that landing page really matter?

You betcha.

Think of it this way: when a guest is invited to a dinner party at your house and shows up on your doorstep, what kind of welcome does he get? Your landing page is your doorstep.

Welcome Guests with Your Landing Pages and Invite Them to Open the Door
I recently attended a free Google webinar where Tim Ash of SiteTuners, a landing page optimization consultant, offered tips for improving your landing page. If you’ve got some time (the webinar runs just over an hour), I strongly recommend it.

In the webinar, Tim highlighted seven landing page pitfalls and fixes. Here, I’ve matched them up with some examples of professional services landing pages. Our landing pages, like most doorsteps, could use some spiffing up.

1. Where’s the doorbell?

Unclear call to action

Unclear call to action

When you invite someone over, you don’t expect them to go around to the back of your house to find the doorbell. Once you’ve attracted a visitor to your landing page, he shouldn’t have to search around to take the action that attracted him there. You have only a few seconds to engage that visitor; online attention spans are notoriously short. It doesn’t take much to send a visitor to the back button, exiting your website to visit another.

Within a few seconds of visiting your landing page, your visitor should be able to answer “What am I supposed to do on this page?” It should be very simple and obvious. As web usability guru and author Steve Krug says, “Don’t make me think.”

Takeaway: Add a call to action above the fold. Make your doorbell visible.

2. Which door is which?

Too many choices

Too many choices

Ever arrived in an apartment complex and been overwhelmed by hundreds of doorbells? Don’t overwhelm your visitor with too many options on your landing page. The more options you offer the less likely it is your visitor will take any action other than closing the browser.

Takeaway: If you have a lot of services to present, don’t give all the detail too early—categorize the options into a manageable number and guide the visitor along a path that allows them to hone in, or drill down, on the specific area that’s right for him.

3. Nice to meet you. Where’d you grow up? What year did you graduate college? What’s the name of your unborn child?

Askin for too much information

Asking for too much information

Say you meet someone new at a dinner party and instead of engaging in a conversation with you they start drilling you with 20 questions. What a turn-off.

The same holds true for your landing page—don’t ask for too much information early on. When creating a form, for each form field ask yourself: is it absolutely necessary to gather this piece of data at this point in the process? (Don’t ask: what info would I “like” to have?)

Takeaway: Only ask for the absolutely necessary info. Consider capturing additional information at a later time, when your prospect is further along in the lead-nurturing process.

4.  TMI

We all know those people who decide to tell us their entire life story along with what they ate for breakfast and wore to bed last night…too much information, thanks!

On your landing page, there is such a thing as TMT (too much text). This goes back to point #1—the short attention span of your visitors and information overload. Don’t add to their burden, lighten it. This is not to say that long copy doesn’t work. You’ll need to test both long and short copy to know which will work best for your service and your audience. It’s OK to provide more detail to those who need or want it (through a link, or with additional detail below the fold, for example), but you don’t need to overwhelm everyone with a high level of detail.

Takeaway: Write clear headlines, put the most important information first, avoid jargon, use bullet points, and edit unnecessary words.

5. Knock, knock: nobody’s home

You don’t invite a guest for dinner and then leave for the night. So why would you tell your visitor to go to a landing page to get something (a white paper, service information, article, webinar, etc.) and then not offer a way to get that exact something on the page?

Look at your promotional materials and landing pages together and ask yourself, “Do I drop the visitor on a page that matches the expectation set in the promotion? Is the promised information there?” If you don’t keep your promise and deliver what you said you would, your conversions along with trust and credibility, will suffer.

Takeaway: Repeat the keywords, text, or message from the source that led the visitor to the page. Match what’s on the page with the expectations your visitor had when he arrived.

6. Wow, that’s an interesting candy cane sculpture on your front lawn

Don’t assail your visitor with annoying graphics unrelated to the topic at hand; he’ll waste time looking at the wrong things on the page and won’t focus on your call to action. It’s OK to have more than one goal for a page, but give your primary message top priority—don’t interrupt that message with visual distractions.

Takeaway: Simplify. Don’t compete with your call to action, remove animation, and replace generic photos with relevant images.

7. Is your door falling off its hinges?

Lack of credibility and trust

Lack of credibility and trust

What impression do you get when you pull up to a house where the stoop is rotting out, the siding is falling off, and the roof is sinking in?

Your landing page needs to instill credibility and trust. You need to demonstrate why the visitor should trust you. Look at your landing pages, do they lack endorsements and social proof (testimonials)? Are they professionally designed?

Takeaway: Improve the production quality of your page. If it looks old and dated, you will too. Use client logos and media badges where possible. Remove your visitor’s anxiety about giving you their email, phone number, or credit card information by featuring your generous policies and guarantees.

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Review your landing pages with an eye to the above rules-of-thumb and you may find yourself creating landing pages more like the examples that follow, than the ones above:

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Most landing pages have problems and all would likely benefit from some spiffing up and improvement. Do you have a a landing page success (or failure) to share?

Topics: Lead Generation & Marketing Tactics, Lead Generation Process, Websites & Landing Pages
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Improve Results: Test and Optimize Your Landing Pages
December 7, 2009 at 6:11 am

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Michael Kelly December 2, 2009 at 1:54 pm

Some great ideas in there for testers as well as designers. I wrote about some of them here: http://www.quicktestingtips.com/tips/2009/12/quick-tests-for-landing-pages/

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Mary Flaherty December 2, 2009 at 5:23 pm

Michael,

Thanks for sharing the test ideas! I’ll be posting an article next week with some thoughts on testing landing pages (and using Google’s Website Optimizer).

-Mary

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Michael Kelly December 3, 2009 at 9:49 am

Awesome. I’ll keep an eye out for it. I just started looking at Google’s Website Optimizer for the first time last week.

-Mike

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Agi Anderson September 2, 2010 at 10:18 am

I agree landing pages, also referred to as capture and squeeze pages must engage the consumer with an offer of value. Offering market value reports is old and tired and every Realtor across the US offers a, “Free Market Report.” I recently did a test offering on the Top Neighborhoods in our area. I placed an ad on CraigsList and had a half dozen people register for the list in just a week’s time. Understanding what drives consumers to take action in today’s tech savyy real estate market is a far cry from placing an ad in the newspaper and saying, Call us!!

Agi Anderson, ePro Advisor
ePro Virtual Marketing Team

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Mary Flaherty September 2, 2010 at 1:02 pm

Agi,

Absolutely — it’s amazing how often the call to action is either weak, completely off-base, or missing entirely.

Thanks for sharing your experience.

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